I have completed my 4th Ludum Dare entry: http://www.ludumdare.com/compo/ludum-dare-24/?action=preview&uid=5150
Of them, I think it is my weakest. I think I was trying to bite off more than I can chew. ;) The game heavily depended on story, and my story writing skills are bad, I think I need a week to make a good story. By the end of it I was getting into my characters and getting the flow of the writing, but I had to stop and finish other things like music and sound effects.
The game has the potential to be a fun little game. Maybe someone will volunteer to help polish it.
Until then, it goes on the pile of cool games I should polish sometime.
Timelapse going up later.